2 Writing (Final crit)
28th October 2024
Responses:
- good form and structure of essay, good tone of voice but the titles are maybe not useful enough
- titles need to better introduce what your project is/does
- interesting how you talk about 2D-3D relationship, expand on it more maybe
- think about how it will be visually presented
- think about the main project title
- develop a more fluid structure and tone of voice